My room
My Haven
My block of peace
in a hectic world
My room
My personal disaster area
of piled clothing and blaring music
of comfortable chaos
My room
My harbor of fantasies
"Gee whiz, Ace, what kinda room is this?" asked Ace Detective's sidekick
"I don't know," Ace replied, "but I like it"
My room
My ongoing rationalization
Joe's brain: Joe's room is messy
Joe: What's new?
My room
My responsibility
the subject of many
"Go Clean Yours"
My room
My prison
the subject of many
"Go to Yours"
My room
My cubicle of terror
zone of nightmares
shelter of my angst
My room
My haven
My organized chaos
My ongoing rationalization
My responsibility
My harbor of fantasies
My prison
My terror
My block of peace
in a hectic world
-Joe Powning
34 comments:
this poem reminds me of my room. lol!
Kayla S.
K.P.M
the image was a boy siting at a desk in his dirty room alone
mood was dark
greg A.
kpm
"My Room" IS a funny poem because it reminds me of my room! How my room has a huge pile of clothes on the floor,and the music is always blaring.
Amber M.
K.P.
this poem is deffinately just like how i feel about my room. i could just picture it by reading the peom.
Amy C.
L.F.P.S
This poem is very intresting since its discribing my room ven like prisson but like what you can feel like in thier its a good place and mostly like heaven.
Caherine.S L.F.P.F
he's very lonely, in his room, and all what he has to do is clean it.
Abby P
L.F.P.S
While reading this poem it made me picture a boy in his room with clothes in a pile and nightmares running through his head.
Mackayla N
L.F.P.S
I like this poem because i think it reminds a lot of people of their own rooms. It gives a clear image of what the room looks like.
Kurtis C.
L.F.P.S
This peom definatly reminds me of my room. It's pretty much always a mess.
Lesley-Anne L.
L.F.P.S
This poem is so great.Is so funny because with a poem you can write wathever what you want.My room is a go subject and in my room I fill..good,enjoy,i fill with myself and i like your poem.
yaromi n.
LFPS
I like this poem.Its very like some people some like to have privacy when they are in there room so its very sweet to no that other people fell the same way.
Nice poem ,Love it
Vanessa N
L.F.P.S
wow, this poem basically descibed my room! I think that it probably also descibed about 75% of teen's rooms. This poem is relatable because it expresses how most people feel about there rooms, a small place of there own.
RobinS.
L.F.P.S
This poem reminds me of my room. My room always ends up being messy.
Zoe F
L.F.P.S
This poem greatly reminds me of my room, and that's what I think this poem is all about.
Samantha T.
L.F.P.S
I have the image of a messy child.
The setting is in other world.
I'm sad when I read this poem.
The message for me is that some people don't have room because don't have money.
Lucy
Class of Mary, Spain
I translated your poem in Spanish.
Mi habitación
Mi paraíso
mi sitio de paz
en un hético mundo
Mi habitación
Mi personal zona desastrosa
Mis montañas de ropa y mi música altísima
de confortable caos
Mi habitación
Mi puerto de fantasía
“Caramba Ace ¿Qué tipo de habitación es esta?” Pregunta el ayudante del detective Ace
“No lo se”, responde Ace, “Pero me gusta”
Mi habitación
Mi actual razonamiento
Cerebro de Joe: La habitación de Joe es revoltosa
¿Qué es nuevo?
Mi habitación
Mi responsabilidad
La asignatura de muchos
“Vete a limpiar la tuya”
Mi habitación
Mi prisión
La asignatura de muchos
“Vete a la tuya”
Mi habitación
Mi cubículo de terror
Zona de pesadillas
Refugio de ansiedad
Mi habitación
Mi paraíso
Mi confortable caos
Mi actual razonamiento
Mi responsabilidad
Mi puerto de fantasía
Mi prisión
Mi terror
Mi sitio de paz
En un hético mundo
Joe Powning
Translated by Lucy (Spain)
This is a great poem, because i love a heven/hell hetic room that no one except me can live in. My room My escape.
p.s. This reminds me of a Boys Like Girls song.
When i read this i think that my room is not my prison it's my space were nothing is right or wrong! i think that this peome says alot about his/her room and mine!
This reminds me of my mess room and I also think that my room is only place that I can have some time to my self,no yelling brother and also no nagging parents.
nicole H.
This poem is just like my room and i can relate to it.but i dont even know how i can live in there but i do.(lol)
This is a very good poem. There is a very good story line to this. Think that the story line to this is that there is also not just a room you don't whant to clean. There is many things in life that you don't whant to clean. There is something like love you don't whant to clean. There is also so other thing like that in life that you whant to clean!
that was a good poam and theonly way to make it better is not to use the same words over again but other then that it was good
"My Room" was a very cool poem! it really tells the truth about some things. My room is a desastre
This poem is kind of all over the place. But still, it reminds me of my room!
Avery K.
K.P.
Kayliegh W. KPManson
this poem is hard to understand but it does remind everyone about there room
This reminds me of my brothers room because his room is alwas a mess but my grandmother alwas cleands it for him grat goob
Ashley.p
K.P.M
When I read this poem I can make a connection to my room and just like in the poem there are many piles of dirty clothes and also in the poem it makes me think of my room being my sanctuary becasue in the poem it says that his room is his sanctuary too.
when i read this poem i can make a visual in my head of a boy sitting in the middle of his bed and just looking down off of his bed and thinking this poem and he is also to scary to get off of his bed becasue he thinks that some think might jump out and bit him or some thing bad like that could happen to him.
Autumn
K.P.M
I think your story was very good because we boys need a place to think of how to bug are sisters
waren w
K.P.M
This poem reminds me of my room and how i'm alawys happyer alone in my messy room
shawndelle R
K.P.M
This poem is very desribing of pritty much every teens room. These days parents have to lay off there teens because teens dont have time for any of the chores all they have time for is school and after school activeteys.(i always use this excuse but it never works:(!) Me and my one brother alays get into trouble for not cleaning our rooms and my other bother cleans EVRYTHING! he sometimes cleans our room for us,but shh dont tell my mom that! ;D
Melissa T.
K.P.Manson
When i read Autumn's post i opened my eyes and thought way to go it as a Text-Selk conection and very good at describing.
Melissa T.
K.P.Manson
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its funny because his last names powning.
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